In today's lesson, we began the presentation for our first assignment which is a group presentation. We watch others present their presentation showing the client summary, positioning statement, concept strategies, personas, and each members stylescapes.
I found which groups did a fascinating presentation on how they approach their client's needs and what they did with the stylescapes. And at the end of each presentation, there was a lot of criticism and feedback for everybody including my group which was helpful and insightful to improve on.
One criticism we received was our persona as they didn't feel like they were believable as was make-believe and were too generic as we made our persona almost like the perfect person that Baby Makes 3 are looking for. Our stylescapes wasn't telling the story from the persona personality and what their style is, and on the application we did was also put into question as these things made us have some rethinking.
After the lesson, we decided to do further research and redo our persona and stylescapes from the feedback we receive today. We decided our persona should not be in the same marriage but in different ones and with different cases. Our male persona will have a different occupation from a stock marketer to a tradie and change his personality as well. The female persona we decided to have her be in a same-sex relationship as Baby Makes 3 is targeting all types of relationship.
We also will be researching warm and approachable brands, service, and products that targets couples and stories of people that were to Baby Makes 3 or stories similar on what Baby Makes 3 is trying to do.
We also will be researching warm and approachable brands, service, and products that targets couples and stories of people that were to Baby Makes 3 or stories similar on what Baby Makes 3 is trying to do.


